This poem is filled with so much passion and because of the detailed description I was able to imagine it really well. You're a good writer ;) Keep it up :)

Without a doubt this is not a run of the mill love poem though very well written and original

This is really good i luv the twist at the end well done its just wow lol :)

Wow. What a night, indeed.

Wow!Joseph
such a beautiful piece,
you showed a lot of creativity and that made this write very enjoyable,
though I have a complaint to make and that is that you denied us the whole story,
especially when the write was at the climax...lols,
nice work,loved it.

Wow this is like a cool poem...it really show how u feel....and the passion i feel in this...i love it <3
5/5