It seems like this author has lost his love but still hopeful for her return. I loved how you define love, very true.

Thank you..

Spontaneous thoughts are always great to read.

I liked your ideas.. how you put them into this poem.

good one.

4/5

I like the thoughts and meanings of this poem, I agree with phoenix 4/5

This was a good write i wouldnt say it was a 5 i thought there was somthing missing ... i also dont get the caps???? the power of your words should be more then enough to stand out ... i just found it a lil distracting all in all tho a good write