Comments : Candid

  • 11 years ago

    by nourayasmine

    Hey there!
    I remember you asked me for m opinions about your writes, right? and here I am givin them! :)
    and in my opinion, this piece is something worth a nomination and is going to be nominated the next week, so everyone can read it! :)

    Do you remember the day
    That everyone was
    Dead or dumb?
    That cat whose ninth life
    lived out on tilt

    that is sooo well-expressed and I so love it.
    a very nice opening, though the poem was short but it made me feel inspired. :)

    there are some metaphors that I didn't really understand, I will PM you asking 'bout them...;)

    five and a nomination!

  • 11 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    ^Agreed :)
    The only thing I will add is to remove the capital letters at the beginning of the lines. They are not needed and really do not fit into the easy eyes.


  • 11 years ago

    by Jess

    Great Poem!!!! Nice Work!!
    5/5 :)