Comments : Heaven....

  • 12 years ago

    by HomoMegan

    I got all choaked up when i read this, its sad but very good. 5/5 from me :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Sora

    Absolutely beautiful. there's no nee to have it rhyme dear, it's coming form your heart that's what matters. i also have many poems that do not rhyme. so you are doing very well! keep up the good work.