Comments : Rosaura's Smile

  • 12 years ago

    by Cinnamonspice

    A poem of reality, waiting for each to make the move. Jump in and win or lose you took your chance.
    I felt such sadness reading this. I hope it was just a poem and not reality for you
    'Connie

  • 12 years ago

    by Larry Chamberlin

    Thank you, Connie. Your comment made me realize I gave the wrong meessage and prompted me to revise the poem. You see, it is dedicated to my wife.

  • 12 years ago

    by Cinnamonspice

    I read it again and I love it even more. It's so sweet and you are both so fortunate to have finally said those 3 little words lol
    Awesome

  • 12 years ago

    by Sunshine

    :) this is amazing... nominated! WEll done.. i am in a JAr of hearts and sea of love, when it comes to 2 u love poems for ur wifey! loves u both haha
    5/.5