by andy cubillan Aug 5, 2011
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
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I'd be the guy who would give you umbrella when everyone else doesn't notice its raining. |
by Jenni
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I think you penned a good piece here. I like the repetition you used and how you changed it in the last line. You said exactly those things that a girl would like her guy to be like or to do. I have to admit that I enjoyed reading this poem and was secretly hoping for my boyfriend to have atleast a few of these "characteristics". |