Can we have another try?

Personally I love it how it is, because poetry doesn't have to have punctuation or correct grammar if the author doesn't feel it is necessary for the poem to make sense. So, all in all I like how ^^^ put it, but I believe you should be just fine leaving it as is. But Oh well just an opinion. Great job

Okay, this was so enchanting to read. I love these passionate feelings, very typical, but I don't know.. I just feel comfortable reading them :)

If you don't mind, here is my comment on the poem (Edited version of your poem :p)

I dreamed about us again;
We argued, for you were mad.
And you seemed so serious that
I couldn't have done anything but cry...
Now, I regret that, for I love you,
but then I uttered goodbye...
It's been a year and more,
yet, I just can't get over you...
Now can we have another try?

^ I hop you like it. I just thought it would be a lot enjoyable to read. :)

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Thanxz b-inlove87...

Love this. so simple yet it gets right to the point <3 5/5