Comments : Rise N' Fall

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    This was so enjoyable and enchanting to read..

    I like this form ;p lol..

    so unique
    !!
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Wow! I'm blown away - I love this poem, so unique and well-written! I love the structure - so different and nice to read! I love it! Great job :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Boy

    Wow.... nice style of writing... unique.. .. i appreciate..

  • 12 years ago

    by average thoughts

    Brilliant idea..excelent job..agree wid princess..

  • 12 years ago

    by Jenna Bella Oldridge

    Loved your flow and how you fitted the whole poem together

    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Larry Chamberlin

    This is a hoot. Loved your sequencing; built up in varying ways: sometimes whimsical, often thoughtful and sometimes profound. Great creativity!

  • 12 years ago

    by RSJ

    A new style.
    Dear you're very talented, and its easy to spot how you become better with every single poem you write. I'm amazed.

  • 12 years ago

    by Sunshine

    OMG i love it, love it so much!
    its so fresh.. now I want to nominate this one as well haha!
    Just really very enjoyable, and gives a very inspiring positive mood!

    loved it

    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    :-) that was amazing drew right in to each and every word - Inspriation is a wonderful thing x

  • 12 years ago

    by bornapoet

    This is so creative

  • 12 years ago

    by lovrgirl96

    Love it!!!