Beautiful <3

I think you penned a good piece here. I like the irony you started with and then the one-liners that seem to be typical things for sleepless nights, especially because the things you mentioned were not too obvious or cliche.

Tragically beautiful....your style is captivating and yet I feel calm reading this....as if your soul is telling this story past the night time. The ending was thoughtful and I loved your clever words of "unstoppable playlist"- good descriptions that added character to this enjoyable piece.

Keep writing.
MaryAnne

A poem so many can relate too. I love how you penned it with simple wording with a lot of impact. Good indeed

Connie

I liked it. The wording was good and easy to understand. The flow was ok. It is short but you were able to get your point across so that's ok.

Gave it a 5/5

I've had a plenty nights like these. You worded this well :)

I relate to this piece and loved how you strapped the poem back and wrote something short and to the point. I am sure many readers will relate to this.

5/5

Love it