Yakkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

stop being so much talented because am here like GRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
WTTTTFFFFFFFF
what is this!!?!?!??
omgggggg
I loved it loved it LOVVVVVVVVVVVVVED it!

Da!
the first sentence, just was really really reallllllllly deep! and well-written, Yakkkiiiii :O am so so inspired noooowwwwww!!!

suggestions:

just capitalize the "i"s hon.
and make the 3rd and the 4th lines into shorter stanzas because they are too long :PP and as you say EYE TAY YA RINGGG

:P:P

awesome, yakkk! five