A pleasure writing with you, baby! :)

A pleasure writing with you, baby! :)

LOL

Either I have a dirty mind, or this poem should belong to profanity category..

ha

but either ways, this is FANTASTICCCCCCCC, literally..

The images you used were extraordinary, and the meanings one can interfere are so many.

I don't dare to tell you what I've understood,, maybe what I have isn't what you mean..

nevertheless, I'm happy with what I understood and read.

maybe Fantastic isn't enough.. !
Fantabulous?
Wickedly Awesome?

:p
The harmony within these thoughts is off the chain.. each stanza flows in sync with the other.

I think this write is PERFECTION!!
ULTIMATE PERFECTION!!

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I fear the candles you
adorn my bed with,
for their sweet light may
burn...

(and my imperfections
may become
visible to you)
^^ Oh my Shizzles... What Image is that????????????????????????????????????? ROCKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK N'ROLLLLLLL BABAAAAAYYYYY!!!

or perhaps
because they mean
we'll make love, tonight
so that, I'll moor
my ship over your
chest.
^ my wicked mind tells me ur gonna have fun in bed :p haha

though still I fear not
your anchor in my waters
nor the immense
delight you plant
on my curves
^ this is BLOAH..!! Great great writing.. and the meaning behind that is so deep and pleasuring :p? (You Dirty Poets,, Love you!)

but...
my heart becoming
too involved in
the situation.
^ Whoever wrote the end is a GENIUS!
All this pleasure and tangible love dissolves at the very end...
I love such methods!! :D

5/5
It's definitely worth a nomination, but since it's a collab, I will nominate Yaki's version because I've already nominated two poems of Nora, sorry :S

You are both amazing,,, and definitely winners!!

---- 5/5--- ;)

NOOOO!!

I'm out of nominations!!

god, what a luck!

As said on Noura's submission, two amazing writers created perfection and I loved it immensely.

your friend, Tara-Kay

Beautifully written. Really nice and smooth. It has a gentle feeling about it. I enjoy your use of words and how easily it just all fell into place. Lovely write :)

Danika.

I like ur collabs. Nice one 5/5 :)

I agree with everyting Abed said. The emotions in this poem are really intense starting with the first stanza:

I fear the candles you
adorn my bed with,
for their sweet light may
burn...

^ These few verses definately set a vivid image, which yet still leave some space for interpretation and imagination. Though the situation you described may seem nice it gets "ruined" by the fact that the speaker fears it.

though still I fear not
your anchor in my waters
nor the immense
delight you plant
on my curves

^ I thought your choice of words was great and that the metaphor you used was a nice way of saying what you two wanted to say without saying it straight away. But maybe it's just me. :P

but...
my heart becoming
too invovled in
the situation.

^ This was my favorite part and it gave your poem the final kick. I have to admit that there is nothing I complain about because it's a great piece overall.

"for their sweet light may burn". I like the play on words here, and I like the image this gave. Interesting!

I also love the part about anchor in the waters. I think the imagery here works really well!

Commenting from my phone, sorry it's not so in depth, but I adored this poem and wanted to say a little something :)