Comments : Shadows

  • 12 years ago

    by Sunshine

    This is just incredible, I do not know what is it about your style that makes me come again to read your work, it is something that makes me see myself through your words.

    i relate to most of your poems, are you really ARE original, u never try too much to impress, yet u do not write cliche poetry! you write from your heart yet with an original tone, i really would be very hapy if you keep writing this way!

    or I belong in the shadows.
    You gave me a black rose
    As a symbol of your love
    but I crave only you.

    ^
    now thats pretty amazing :)
    so many symbols, very very mature!

    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by yogi73

    You poems about giving love as opposed to your poems of jilted love are better...more expressive. nice poem