Another beautiful poem! So sad but so beautiful. <3

Oh my,
I read this and thought, That's me.
I wanted to give some honest criticsm, but I cannot as this was beyond perfect,
the flow was flawless,
the rhyming was so easily inserted into each line,
and was so sad, yet beautifully worded,
Imagery was brilliant too.
Wow, I'm speechless
love,
Tara
5/5 for sure!

Thankyou so much Tara :) That means alot x

I agree with Tara! this was catchy and well-done. Good job :)

Thankyou so much for your comments :) <3

Thankyou so much for your comments :) <3

I know I've already commented this but I couldn't help but comment again, I've read through this a couple of times & I can't find a single fault, you're a true poet and you should write more often, I don't see enough of your stuff! Take care and I look forward to reading more of your work! :)

Wow.. i love this. Its so deep, you can feel the pain and how relive she feels to finally be ending her life. Amazing job :)
5/5

Your poem are so unique, i couldn't stop myself adding you to my fav author list..
Keep the good work up! ':)

Awwh thank you so much! xx