Another beautiful poem. Love makes life brighter and it seems you are walking on sunshine. I wish you forever with your Eve

Connie

This is a beautiful poem that shows how much you feel for her, amazing 5/5

A fantastic lovely poem I loved it it's all so great and I can kinda relate,,,It was all really amazing :) 5/5

What a lovely, heartfelt romantic poem

I hope Eve reads this! It's nice when a poem is written about you!

The love that I have for you is stronger than the sun,
I fell for you faster than a bullet fired from a gun.

^^^^^^^^^^^
I love the imagery here!

Well done

x

This is so beautiful!!!! I love it!!! Great job

Beautifully written. loved how you assured your lover of your love and how you spiced it up with rhyming. great poem

I love this...amazing

She's lucky to have a guy as sweet as you(:
5/5 from me Babii x