Salut for my favorite writer!
right now am almost outdoors, when am back at night, on a regular laptop :P i WILL give you my boring comment and tell you how much i love this piece..just for the moment, u should now that,
you rock.

This was amazing :-) you took something simple and turned it into something enjoyable to read. What an imagination \. just an good all around poem

Connie

A nice write with a simple and effective metaphor. Probably most poets feel the same way at some stage or other. The only thing I would change I think is that I would leave out this line as it doesnt really add anything:
'or some other undesirable food'

Other than that though interesting read