Comments : You Have My Heart

  • 12 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    I hav some few suggestions hope you dont mind..
    in line six,instead of "sense", i think it should be "since"
    in line two, instead of "fix", i suggest"fixed"
    in line 8, i suggest "changed" instead of "change"...
    and it this line "I dont know if it good or Bad"..i think it could be "i dont know if its good or bad"....

    but overall, this is a great poem i enjoyed reading..
    still gets a 5/5