Comments : Charisma

  • 12 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    Life goes on:) like the poem 5/5:)

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    Ms Bubbles x]

    I love this write.
    Steamy.. but sad!

    Good job.

  • 12 years ago

    by Britt

    I must ask, what is your idea ofthe difference between charm and charisma? I think they go hand in hand, but I also think you can have charm without charisma, but you cannot have charisma without charm. Does that make sense..? lol

    I like the repetition with idea of shoes, of course not real shoes but more so the journey and paths you take, thought it was an interesting feel.

    The ending really hit home for me, being addicted to being hurt. It's almost easier to hurt than to stand against the pain, easier to wallow and cry rather than gain the courage and pride to do something about it. I love that ending, it definitely made me think, a lot. Love, love, love this poem.

  • 12 years ago

    by nouriguess

    Wellll......at first!?
    i didn't grasp the meaning, it was a bit confusing wallah :) bas e5er she i was like "OHHHH how stout!" yes stout and sorry for my weird vocabs but eghhh loved it.

    "your anger hunts me with elderly
    voices that dwell within my heart
    and believe me it hurts, hurts so bad."

    and

    "But this season I am tired from
    green grass, worn shoes, dull light
    and cloudy voices in my head.
    And though I got addicted to being
    hurt, I might just move on instead."

    JUST took my breaths awayyyy and left me speechless...oh deer how amazingly you portray everything!!!! jeezzee...girl!

    just the first two lines, ms bubbles haha :P told ya sunshine a7la ma raddaite ;P