Don't know how to..

by alyssa   Aug 29, 2011


I wake up every Monday,
with a big smile on my face,
I can't wait to see you,
you make my day.
I always think about you,
you're always with me,
always smiling at me
and when I catch you looking
looking at me.
I don't know what to think,
don't know what to do.
Do you like me?
Because I like you.

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  • 12 years ago

    by alyssa

    Thanks:)

  • 12 years ago

    by Jenni

    I'd recommend you to change the format to the following as it'd be more appealing:

    I wake up every Monday,
    with a big smile on my face,
    I can't wait to see you,
    you make my day.
    I always think about you,
    you're always with me,
    always smiling at me
    and when I catch you looking
    looking at me.
    I don't know what to think,
    don't know what to do.
    Do you like me?
    Because I like you.

    This way it flows better. I like the message of this poem and the feelings. This is definately heartfelt and I think that the emotions are powerful. The simplicity of this piece is quite nice aswell.

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