This is really good and really proves ur love to be strong an true... Really good poem :) 5/5

Just some suggestions i have,in the second stanza "He pick" can be changed to "he picked" and in the last stanza "i go" can be changed to "i'll go", it will sound better then..but overall, i enjoyed this poem...5/5

Sooo sweet it is :) liked it

Thnx aanika.:)

This isn't a bad poem. However, you took alot of it from another poem that has been around for years.... I am not cutting down what is your original work, but seriously it's rather disrepectful and against the law to use anothers copyrighted work as your own.... Keep it real.

Wow,loved it..5/5

I really enjoyed this poem, the first time I heard it years ago. Try not to plajorise others poems, its so much better when you write your own feelings x

Love reading this poem=)