I don't know what else to say except that this is great the thought of the grim reaper dying is too strange to contemplate. Wow.

I liked it. It was different. It's a good length. The wording was good and easy to understand. It told a good story. I saw nothing wrong with it.

gave it a 5/5

The rhymes seemes very forced... The idea is such a great one, i would love to see it written without any rhymes at all

Your rhyme theme to me was good. Though a lot of this is borderline cliche I think you did a great job. It was dark and chilling, and the end was perfect :-)

Connie

This is amazing!! Nothing at all to complain about. Awesome length, terrific word choice, strong story, and an fantastic flow. It was gripping in all the right places. I gave this a 5/5 because it truly is wonderful!!!

I Like The Scary Feal To This Poem. Awesomee Work!!!!
5/5

Dark, and awesome :)

I think this isn't as cliche, as it could be, because of the second stanza. I would like to see it more about that. Why do they want to have the reaper take down his hood? What are the motives of all of the "characters" in this poem?
I'm wondering what the purpose of the capitalized words, "Hive", "True" and "Shield". I'm not complaining about it, I just want to know what is the purpose? I like to understand poems in all of their entirety.
What do you want to convey with this poem? What feeling? I think you have a good start, and you definitely can write, I just think that there lacks some... Emotion.
However, beautiful imagery.
Good job c:
-z

Ooo, very dark and thrilling. Gives off a very...haunted feel if that makes any sense. Great write. Really nice.

Loved it- good always overcomes evil. Life over death