I knew you could make it, dude! XD
so, this is my baby winner, ain't it??
Good job, Zahra you've nailed it :) <3

I loved the word usage in this poem. Imagery was great. It is also a good length and flows nicely.

gave it a 5/5

I really like the choice of words and the imagery of this poem good job :)

ZAHRA :)

I really like to go to Bahrain.. well and every single Arabian country :S

You blew me away with these images dripping with a will to live and die for a cause... A BIG CAUSE!

I hope the situation there is finer now!
God bless you.

-May we all live in peace.
FIVE

It's a very nice poem,,so touching. You know because of all these problems going on in this world I feel that the end is very close, but I still that part of me who is still pushing me forward telling me that everything is going to fine at the end..I won't give up this hope and now I believe that before dawn comes there must be a dark night..Nice poem.

5/5