Remarkble
i like ur new style.
this is very well portarayed i'm amazed.

I agree with Rabea about your lovely new style, goodjob, girl. You amazed me with this piece, though it is straight from the heart and simple and many will think it is not that deep, but it is and I like it so damn much. Good work (as always) keep writing in this style because it fits your emotions so well.. ;)

Loveee This. Amazing Poem.

I still see who you are, since you
failed to notice that I closed my
eyes, and that I always looked at
you with my heart.

My favorite stanza, showing that you don't need to open your eyes to realize who he is,but your heart can just tell everything.
Love it, so good. The emotion just poured out
5/5

Wow this was really great. I enjoyed everything of it.. The simplicity, the images, and the flow are flawless..
And to tell you, i thought that the title is somehow weak, until i read your note.
Very well portrayed.

Wow! I love this.... Girl, this poem has so much depth and raw emotion... I can relate to it! You've expressed emotions that are so hard, I hate the feeling of caring for someone, but seeing them slip away and change right before your eyes... Amazing! Great job hon!!!

I have to agree with all the above. I really loved this piece. Everything about it was amazing. I believe this in a favorite and a definite nomination

Connie

Grr used my votes up for the week

Nice finish on that last stanza! way to wrap it up in a nice controlled manner! Good job!