I really liked the title to be honest because I have not seen something similar before. I also think that you managed to mix music and poetry quite well because your well-worded verse flow like music. The fact that the stanzas got shorter as you were slowly reaching the end gives the reader already the idea of the story finishing. I think you wrote this quite well.

Diffffffffffffffffeeerrrrreeeennnntttt,,, YES!
Different, different, different! you were right, I knew it! Good work once again, Tony, I so much like this piece of art. :)
I hope someone would nominate this because it is so good! I used sadly all of my votes. :(
Good job, once again!

I thought this was well penned, I liked how the stanza's decreased in length which was a great addition.
A great flowing piece with good imagery.
love
Tara
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Like Noura says this is different, but I actually like it, plus any poem that involves music great job 5/5 x

You're so versatile, your imagination must work overtime and from it the sweetest words hit the paper. I love this very peaceful and serene piece.

Connie

Yea, you can surely write about anything & make it a great poem(:.

The sound of coins as he appears
Moving oh so graciously
Entering every heart

Love this stanza. Shows how graciously he moves around ppl & how easily he can get into there hearts and once hes gone, everything is different.
Great Job(:
5/5

This is so much different, Tony(:
Change is often good, but here it is marvelous! What a lovely write..
I loved the imagery!
The title got me thinking something else,
and I read the poem and I'm like, ":O OOOH!"
This is a wonderful write.

5 out of 5!

This is very unique and I also agree it is 5/5 material. Excellnet job.