This is such a powerfull piece, it really hit home with me. Lately ive been struggling with issues of my own, and I feel like theres a reason why I happened upon this poem. the way you held your rythm and rhyme was simply not a waste of any time! Its so true to the heart and rmember this, these things do happen I know first hand of this, its so sad such a life can fall apart but excellent work in the telling of this from the start.

people need to wake up and realise that these things do happen we cant all bury our heads in the sand. I hope you continue your work in telling what needs to be brought to others attention. Never let anyone put you down or tell you these kinds of works are wrong or ill willed. you just keep at it.

Love - Kat

This poem makes me feel like I want to reach out and save the seven year old! It was very well written, and very sad.. good job, keep writing!