Lovely......
like it, keep up the good work.
(5/5)

Very nicely written. you convey your desires and wishes for your woman in a nice and lovely way.

This entire piece is captivating....well done~

Great poem, I like the whole piece so I don't have a favorite line.

This is very beautiful and so captivating. Such a masterpiece.
5/5
Truly an adorable write.