Comments : She's Alone

  • 12 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    Short but love it.

    you can see her laying out in the desert alone & in the cold

    great job
    5/5 :)

  • 12 years ago

    by shayla

    Aww i love this poem
    it reminds of me sitting alone

  • 12 years ago

    by Brittany Klein

    Very good! i love it! you can just picture the girl sitting there....all alone

    good job!! 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Ebony Hope

    Wow, imagery is excellent here. I love how well you have given a scene with so few words. The word choice is immaculate, since there are so few, but they convey such a strong story. 5/5 for sure

  • 12 years ago

    by Liliana

    I like the fact that this is short but the imagery and words are well-chosen

  • 12 years ago

    by Dominique Lewis

    I love it Tyler. I love how it is short but it makes perfect sense. 5/5 Great job. Love ya Tyler :D

  • 12 years ago

    by ImperfectlyBeautiful

    Great job tyler<3 i really felt the emotion in this poem<3katie

  • 11 years ago

    by Silent Girl

    I feel so alone at times i like this poem short and sweet love it :) Tyler

  • 11 years ago

    by Marvellous

    Where loneliness bangs, guard loosens. Within unity, lies freedom.

  • 9 years ago

    by BlueJay

    All of this bloody murder,
    Because someone desert her.

    ^ just curious but shouldnt desert be deserted her?

    other than that even for a short piece this is well done. great job.