Comments : No one knows

  • 12 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    I love this girl.
    Emotion of just wanting him there more then anything poured through. You can feel the pain she feels as and yearns for him.
    Thinking nobody understands why hes so important. But him being the only one she wants.

    Love it <3
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Matthew Schut

    Wow, awesome write! SO much emotion and longing! I love it! Good work!! :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    The emotions in this poem are heartfelt..great work.

  • 12 years ago

    by Whatever works

    A very sad poem

    formed by heartbreak ? it was expressive

    and ive wished for the same things too

    keep writing if it helps