Once again, great work. i really loved the ending, it was perfect

This piece oozed desperation and hopelessness. The read is made to feel so lost for the persona; made to feel how they do. It's made to sound all the more heartbreaking by the lines:

"there is nothing but an empty shell,
all is taken away
in vain
of a life once lived." -- We see that the persona's circumstances used to be so difference, which is what makes everything all the more sad.

A beautiful piece, but tragic.