Omg, my favorite poem :)
I love this!

It was snowing that night, or
perhaps I was frozen in time,
I cant tell anymore. All I can
recall are the scars, the bruises
and the broken heart.

This shows how hurt you were, that he could just throw you away without any hesitation.
This poem flowed perfectly, and you could create the image in your head vividly.
Amazing Poem (:
5/5

I've forgotten how good you can be with love poems
especially with your new writing technique
keep going, you're only getting better
5/5
nominated

Oh ... :)

MeMe :))))

A sweet poem - I have no Idea how you made me picture you being a page and wrinkled then moving to a new book and so on so forth :D ....

This is a very beautiful picture, pretty much expressive. A sweet write as you always did with your romantic writes.

Oh my favorite stanzas are the first and the last one :)).

WOW!! Amazing write girl! I loved it! :) Keep it up!! :)

I loved how you caught the readers interest and you walked through the stages of a wrinkled page! :)

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Looooooooved this stanza :)

"Days went by, but am still left on
that dusty floor, until the wind
blew me away to the arms of a
new book, a book called "You"."

awesome write.... :)

Looooooooved this stanza :)

"Days went by, but am still left on
that dusty floor, until the wind
blew me away to the arms of a
new book, a book called "You"."

awesome write.... :)

Hey diz onez simply awsum, awsum n awsum, cannot find ryt words... Simply superb diz one...

So many diamonds r dumpd as coal stones.... Alwys tru ppl r betrayd, hurt, ignord, lied to... Used..... N tru lingerin in dustbins, wilderness, isolation.... Until u find d eyz of anoder diamond lyk d subject in diz masterpiece poem n dat diamond vl recognize d diamond in u..... N u discover ur self n ur dreamz turn tru awl of a sudden.... Lyf may b strange but not above d miracles of GOD....:) evry broken lyf getz a tru purpose n meaning 2 live... But only after undergoin pain n so many sacrifices...... Luvd diz one though endings r tragic most of d tymz... Buy thank God diz one had d best end it deservd...:) keep it up, really c I alwyz told... U r gettin better n better wid evry write! Keep it up...:)...;)

It's nice to read a happy love poem. a well written one at that. good job

Wow, girl, this poem is amazing! I loved it - and I loved how you compared yourself to a page in a book... and your metaphors were beautifully painted... I loved the repetition of the first two lines in the last stanza, it really made it stand out more. And I love that it has a happy ending =) it made it very sweet!

I just have a few grammar suggestions, that if you change it will be absolutely perfect!

"I cant tell anymore. All I can" >> change to can't

"Days went by, but am still left on" >> change to I am or I'm

And just the can't in the last stanza.. that's all !

Great job hon - really loved it!