Comments : False smile

  • 19 years ago

    by Leah.A.

    Wow... that's one deep poem. I can tell you put a lot of thought and heart into the poem. The way you wrote the poem itself brought it to life and it gave me goose bumps. Every word that you used was perfect in order to make such a wonderful poem. Keep up the great writing. I look forward to reading more of your poems, especially poems as good as this one. Take care of yourself.

  • 19 years ago

    by kellie goldman

    just wanted to let u noe i gave it a five.. thanx for commenting me. i decided to read ur poem, nd it gave me a reason to comment.. it was wonderful.. keep up the good work..

    (*(Kellie)*)

  • 19 years ago

    by twisted faith

    this is one of the best poems i've read in a while. keep up the gd poems

  • 19 years ago

    by Zayda

    Hun, I wish I didnt know how you feel, I wish... Hun, would you plz read a couple of my poems... they ere certainly not as good as yours but I try hard... Its just that... I feel like... I feel like... I know how you feel... I understand what you say and your poems make me cry... Its not fair for anyone to feel dispair... Its not ok for anyone to feel lonely... Hun, I get really touched by all your poems... A person as great as you should be happy, certainly not go through what you've gone... Hun, if you ever wanna talk to someone... Im here... psyduck_zay@hotmail.com Im here, hun, Im here... I'd be flattered to meet such a brave girl...

  • 19 years ago

    by FireCracker

    I loved this poem to ! Gave it a 5 !

  • 19 years ago

    by The Plain Truth

    This poem brought tears to my eyes, it was so much like it was describing me. There was not one thing that I couldn't relate to. I would love to talk to you sometime, balistic_chic@hotmail.com
    I loved the poem, keep writing.

    Megan §

  • 17 years ago

    by Twisted Mind Broken Soul

    YOu deff. Have some talent to you. But I still think it's weird because it's like you know everything I'm thinking and you write it all down. In almost every one of your poems I can relate to soemthing in it. Your such an amzing girl and you don't deserve to be treated the way you do. I hope that soon time will change all and you will realize that you are something special, your not just an ugly girl!!! Your going to meet someone one day and to them you will be the most beautiful girl in this whole world, just wait and see. Until then if you have msn or yahoo add me if you ever wanna chat
    onlyhottie_15_2004@yahoo.com
    babygirl_4-ever_16_2005@hotmail.com