When You Sleep

by Lauren Kaye   Sep 8, 2011


I wonder if you look at me when you think I'm not looking?
If you secretly think about me when you're with your friends?
I know you're happy with her, but when you're sleeping...
Is it me, the last thing, you see before your dream ends?

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  • 14 years ago

    by Jenni

    This poem may be short, but it's obvious that this is a heartfelt poem, that is filled with emotions. The emotions are quite strong though I'm sure you could add to it still. It flows well even though the verses seem quite long and I like that the speaker directed this to the person she's thinking off.
    I'm sorry if you feel this way though.