Comments : Rollercoaster Relationship

  • 12 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Omg... wow i loved it started out sad and then i got happy at thee end...perfect fantastic poem and very heartfelt...i loved it :) :) 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    This is my favorite poem of yours :).
    Amazing, absolutely breathtaking.

    Showing how her love was so strong & you didn't care to realizing how much you love her to her laughing in your face.
    I can't pick a favorite part of this poem, i love everything :)
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This poem really held my attention without missing a beat

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    I like the title.
    Roller-coaster relationship. It really fits this poem.

    So far, I think this is one of your best poems. It really got my attention when i started reading it.

  • 12 years ago

    by yogi73

    Very open poem. probably your deepest. good job on this one!

  • 12 years ago

    by No1ButMe

    I liked how many emotions you could see through this. I saw so many as the story unfolded and that is a very amazing talent. Yes there were ups and downs but in the end you have become stronger and who you were meant to be. It should give more people hope, which is something we all need. Another amazing piece. Continue to do the right thing and become a stronger you. 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by amanda

    This was a really amazing poem. It held my interest the whole time. Great job!

    • 11 years ago

      by Dave

      Thank you i apreciate your feedback