At least you know why you stay up late ;), and trust me if there is a will there is way, do not give up, and I for one, can see it happening ;) :]

hugs*
wish i could know wats on my mind lol
5/5

Aww .. this poem is the story of my life! Well not exactly, but I stay up a lot, and have had problems sleeping! I'm happy to say my sleep is MUCH better now... but anyway, I liked the poem.. I think this is relatable topic since we've all stayed up all night thinking of someone before!

Nicely expressed. Great job :)

My mind keeps telling we can
never be for one another, but
my heart refuses, it can't stop
falling in love with you.

I Love this stanza, knowing that its not good for you but you can't help it. I can relate to this<3.
I love this poem, emotion poured through,wanting nothing more then to let it go & fully be able to sleep without him in your mind.
Amazing Job(:
5/5

I'm speachless by all means
lol, once again i relate fully. you deserve the full mark for this
5/5 and gjob dear.

Ha ha diz topic u tchd iz d same wonderful painful yet d best possible thing we. Ppl experience lots of tymz... Last week itself it happnd 2 me as usual n I wrote a quote also on dat topic, n I posted it o'er here ystday...
Nyc 2 c a poem based on d subject... I lykd awl d lynz...

Luvly topic n wonderful write as eva....;) keep it up...;)

This poem touched me. It reminds me of how I felt a few years ago when I liked someone who didn't like me back. I found this poem to be sweetly written yet it had that tinge of sadness to it too.

5/5

My mind keeps telling we can
never be for one another, but
my heart refuses, it can't stop
falling in love with you.

Wow, I love this stanza. I know this all too well. The best decision, right decision, and hardest decision is hard to deal with. I wish you the best.

Keep smiling!! :)

This is the kind of excellent poetry. so shopt but say alot of words. it always happend to me in past. it made me sad.

Wow..now this is
Short
Simple
Beautiful
Well flowed
And catching..

D whole poem is a piece of art..but thr is a line whr u hv mentioned dt u hv bcm my lullaby and keeps me awake..wow so refreshing..keep on writing simple like dis..simple yt powerful.