Though the whole poem is awesome... but this stanza i loved the most....

"Oh September, with you I have started
my journey to the unknown, with the falling
leaves of yours a part of me fades, I wonder
what will you bring me next year ?"

coz after facing the worse, & losing the hope...yet we question life whats next??? :(
a good write :)

Yes, I am the child of autumn, an imprisoned
soul that travels with the warm breeze of its
soundless afternoons, captivated in an endless
nights of lonesomeness.

My favorite stanza :)
I love this poem, it flowed so well & you could see what you were talking about.

Happy Birthday gIrl Again (:
This poem is sooo good :)
5/5

Luvly poem yet again... We have come tru so many seasonz n sumhow lyk one season or a chapter in our lyf in dat season, we fall in luv wid dat season n wait evry year 4 dat season 2 return wid d same wonderful thingz or memories... But as a fact of lyf seasons come only memories change each year...:)

Nyc wryt yet again as alwyz... Keep it up fren...;)

5/5, you have an abosuletly amazing job with this poem, the flow is just beyond powerful
staggered.

Nominated!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Very good poem.. definitely the last stanza was the best stanza. then ending and beginning was so good. that makes it perfect. keep writing. my favorite stanza is

Oh September, with you I have started
my journey to the unknown, with the falling
leaves of yours a part of me fades, I wonder
what will you bring me next year ?

hope for the best dear :) keep writing