Comments : Ghastly Encounter

  • 12 years ago

    by lonerbabe

    This is good i like the words chosen and ryhmes well done i liked the ending hope yuh keep makin new poems :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Wow this was very good and a very surpriseing ending. I though i knew where this was leading but in the end it was a big turn around i very much enjoyed reading this and very muches love love loved it :) :)
    My favorite lines:
    With my groggy looks and dagger bitten skin
    gnarled arms i waded through consuming mist
    my deadly cold pale legs flayed
    as if its human strings were torn with rage
    i could feel a stoop in my walk
    as i saw twigs with bloody stalk

    the entire poem was fantastic :) :) 10 stars

  • 12 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    This shows you can write all types of poems & them be really good :).

    You used good imagery, you can see whats happening & whats going on.
    I loved it :)
    great job

  • 12 years ago

    by Captain Lonesome

    Great job i like how it makes you envision the avents as it plays out, I like it!! 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Liliana

    Yeah this is good:) I really like some choice of words here keep it up

  • 12 years ago

    by The Po whet

    A good piece,just like the previous ones.
    I especially liked the imagery you portrayed in this.
    Keep up,this is nice.

  • 12 years ago

    by Jenni

    I really loved the ending. I actually think, that this is a well written poem, but I agree to SpiritRising about the punctuation part. I like how you described everything really detailed, that painted a really vivid image, well done.

  • 12 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    You have talent

  • 12 years ago

    by vip

    Lovely poem!