Jenni, I don't know what to say, Originality penned with perfection, maybe?
Lol
Seriously, this was brilliant! The flow was great and the wording simple yet brilliantly.
love it
5/5

love,
Tara

This is cool:) well written and I love it:) 5/5

So diffrent to anything ive read though it was penned with perfection and trumendous talent x

WOW! I really enjoyed this.
It feels as a Lady Gaga song.. haha :p lol, really, like YOU & I, her latest single of the Born This Way album :)

I enjoyed it so much.. the wording, the images, the flow.. all perfect!

Nominated the next week :)
HIGH FIVE

I love the last portion: "the art of losing is to
regain it all."....5/5 for this

The last line brought this poem to life, it was really a wonderful poem. I could picture from what you wrote the whole scene.

Connie

Wow... this poem is amazing! I loved it! The title caught my eye... and I loved the story you've expressed in this poem... I loved the original idea of this waiting room of happiness, but you are focused on one person and want to help them... The ending was perfect, and so strong! I loved it...

"But..
the art of losing is to
regain it all. "

With a few words in the above stanza, you made a huge impact... Loved it! Well done! 5/5

Wow. they said everything I thought of and much more. Terrific job, and someday I'll leave you a real comment, I promise. For now, though, amazing piece. Its very unique

Oh oh ohhhhhhh wait
I DID comment on this, didnt I?
??

but I cant see my name over there......OHHH you deleted my comment!!!? :@:@

:P:P
This was more than amazinggg........I couldnt help but ........nominate and then OPPS Error you have voted three times this week...bla bla bla..:(

Anyway the next week this will be on the top of my nominations...love ya! :P:P
five five fiveeeeeeeeeeeeeee

Once again... u got me speechless..:) i don't know what to say ?? :) great work.. i love this..:)5/5

It was different. I liked it. It was worded nicely. It was a good length and flowed good.

gave it a 5/5

You're the change of scenery
I always looked for and
I want to remove the sorrow
in your eyes.

My favorite line! keep em going, Jenni!
you're awesome ;)

I enjoyed the poem and I liked it alot. I found the end of the poem very interesting and thought this poem was put together well

5/5

Definitely loved the ending and the questions it leaves behind to ponder over.
5/5

-Heather