Ur poems ar too sweet.

A well-deserved win, Jenni.

One thing that I think may need to be changed is this...

"Your tender hug brings
me back to reality, though
I'll never leave loves clouds,"

where it says "leave loves clouds,"
I think it should say love's clouds.
Just a thought though, dear.

5/5

-Heather

A sweet poem it is i love evry line in dis poem... Great job 5/5

Wow..that more than amazing.

Aweeeeeee

Fantastic writing.

This was beautiful and it sounded really heartfelt which always gives a poem more power...good job : )

So ADORABLE!

"appetite makes me
drowsy and I'll never have
enough.."

Favorite line <333

Love this poem!!!!!<3

Love this poem...!!! it made me remember my love...

Outstanding:) check out my poems:)

Cute poem liked it