Comments : Walking Away From You

  • 12 years ago

    by Kelwin lost in thought

    Baby I love it and I am so sry. I bleed so much for you I almost died. Buy I couldn't die because my heart beats for you. I am sry love and I know I won't be able to make it up to you but I'll do anything for you. I'd go insain for you I'd walk the whole world to make you happy. I'd give my life for you. You are my heart beat my very breath. You are the world to me and I broked you. You gave me your most precious thing to me and I walked all o er it. I am sry love. I hate myself for it

  • 12 years ago

    by StitchedxDarkness

    I can relate to this so much; well written :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Emmanuel Pineda

    This is a slam poem. Well done! I like it ;)