Jenni, This was breathtakingly beautiful.

The imagery was so serene and romantic yet heartfelt too, there was sadness yet hope, there were dreams and happiness, this was just like the best thing I've read today!!

I loved everything about this, the gentle structure and simple yet so damn cute wording and just the flow was perrrrfection!!!

WOW
Just Wow
Loved it

love,
Tara
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everything just seemed more than perfect.....ur pictures ur flow ur images.....the way you were so passionately afraid of being solo in love and yes ive experienced this feeling before and i know what its like to lose someone or something or whatever you love.....this write just stood out to me! i was like....amazed daazzzled..and wowing all the way till the very end..........
sometimes we are home but we dont actually feel home and YES i know this feeling you lovely cutie poetess

this if nominated will be for sure a winner, if not ill nominate it for you and will also be a winner...:P so i at times bring bad luck hahaha

and there is one word that tara said very well.....is that this write was so sincere...whats important is the emotions and just the emotions!

soooo proud of you, baby.....:)
welldone.

love.

I am speecless:) WoooooooooooW amazing:) I told u ur much better than me:) ofc a 5/5 from me:)

Wow do I need words, this is really good Jenni I really love the imagery of this its pretty amazing 5/5

You are the poet of the year sweet Jenni. I love everything you do and never see a flaw. Watch out pnq Jenni is taking over :-)

I think u painted a perfect picture of ur expression

Jenni, this is amazing. I think you have done a magnificent job. But sadly I think everyone has beat me to the things I was planning to day. All that I am able to add would be that the flow is excellent, the word choice amazing, and emotion is dead on.

What should we dream of?
What can we believe in
while we're like this?
We carry through the night,
unaware of whose hands
we'll be holding next. Not
satisfied by being with always
changing lovers, we never expected
to leave...

This ^^ personally is my favorite stanza, because it does paint out what most consider to be the truth.

Once again fantastic job.

This is indeed a beautiful poem...:)

Wow, Jenni I loved this poem... It was so interesting to read from the start to the end... I loved the first stanza, it really captivated me and made me want to continue reading. And I think the ending was perfect... I liked that you ended it with the questions, and that the question was the title... It all fit perfectly. I liked the concept you expressed in this poem... How people don't really know what they want sometimes, they dream of things, and things change like loved ones etc... At least that's how I understood. Great job!!!

Jenni I hope your poem wins, if I had noticed it before I would have nominated it myself. Excellent job girl, creative and just an enjoyable read.

"I'm drowsy
not because of being sleepy,
but your kiss intoxicates me
and we decide to dream together
at least once more."

^ this part of your poem made me go awwwwww its so sweet

5/5

I loved this poem! Amazingly written, I especially like the fourth stanza, since it is so familiar to me.

"It's keeping me up at night
because I realize that
I prefer dreams;
You then return my love."

"I'm drowsy
not because of being sleepy,
but your kiss intoxicates me
and we decide to dream together
at least once more."

I loved this part. Because that is how I am a lot. =)
Don't stop writing. :) Your words are beautiful.

I think that this particular poem proved itself. I have been reading your poems, trying to find which ones I adore most to comment apon, and this one stopped me in my tracks. I think that this is more than just a poem, its an actual feeling. Something I see lacking in other poems, I see in this one. Wow Jenni, I have to say you suprice me more and more with each poem I read by you.
5/5
Jessi

"Can you hear that?
The world is slowly waking up,
but I'd prefer to relish the moment
while we still can. Just stay in bed
a little longer and warp your cuddly arms
around my dizzy self."

I think that you meant "wrap" instead of "warp" here because warp is kinda like going warp speed into space stuff. Yeah, I just made a lame joke... anyway..

I just thought I'd help you out with that. Other than that another poem beautifully penned by you. :D

5/5

-Heather