I loved this teaching thru poetry! It flows and rhymes wonderfully Randy. I really love the poem itself it was very entertaining and creative to say the least..I learned alot with this jingle. Thanks for sharing it
Lostlove

This was perhaps the most clever and well put together poem ive ever read. awesome read

Finally, I've finished reading this poem. Whoa, almost of your stuff are really amazing nothing can compare of. It's conveying a very good lesson. Thanks for sharing this:))
5/5
~C

"Infinity... it's relevance!
why must it truly be?
As I look into the star lit sky,
it's what I truly see.

But how does it tie in
to the existence of our God?
And is existence truly infinite,
to this I simply nod."

These two stanza's really get me thinking, good starter.

"Infinity is a concept some Scientists
refuse to see as fact.
Quantum Mechanics, as an example,
their equations all go whack!"
I like the personality that you put into this poem, I have to say this stanza kind of made me laugh though its so true.!

"Can a particle be infinite?
I postulate "one" can.
and in this poem I'll tell you how,
Perhaps you'll understand."
Oh, this is getting interesting when I read this stanza:)

"Occams razor says it's so,
shortly put, it's a philosophy, in that.
"The simplest truth is always the truth",
when building up to fact."
Again this is so true:O

"So how can a particle be infinite?
Try to imagine one in your mind,
for what ever size you imagine it at,
it's that... at that given time.

And whatever size "that" is,
locks the sphere in place.
thus making it a finite size.
in that moment, set in place."
Very good flow i like how you make the reader really think it captures your attention and makes you want to keep reading!

"he ladder being the particle that falls,
on the inside of its Dome.
As the formers infinity exists and acts
as an infinite bulk or home."
I like the wording in this stanza.

"Now why do I say "white hole" here?
Well...because matter simply "is"
You see, a black hole of infinite size.
in truth, is a thing that don't(does not) exist."

I think don't doesn't fit well here I think you should say does not instead because it throws off the flow and doesn't make much sense, "is a thing that does not exist." After this stanza the flow seems to disappear and I feel your going off topic a bit untill-
"Yes...I talk a lot of talk
about the cosmos and the stars,
but how does that connect to
the bodies that are(Called) ours."

I feel it should say called here because it would make the flow better but that's just me!

"After all... I look into that star lit sky,
and I know that it's all connected.
At Jesus Birth there came a star,
and that truth is well respected."
This is so true I liked this stanza.

"But God is "THEE" Omega,
and our Omegas are alpha to His size,
what you see is your Omega
in the mirror with your eyes.

Yes... God is "THEE" Omega,
and His Alpha is THE Son.
Where one beget the other
yet they exist in unison."
I really liked the flow here and the wording.

"One day we'll meet His Omega
To see him in "Body Form"
Tell then ... perhaps his alpha
is that thing that keeps us warm.

But do not pray to the Sun at all,
He says that would be a sin.
He wants us to love him for who he is
not some particle within."
This was a great ending and i could tell all the work you put into this poem i enjoyed it!

I agree with Lostlove1. Amazing poem. You have a way of making your poems flow so greatly. :) Thank you for sharing the lesson through this poem. :)

But how does it tie in
to the existence of our God?
And is existence truly infinite,
to this I simply nod.

Infinity is a concept some Scientists
refuse to see as fact.
Quantum Mechanics, as an example,
their equations all go whack!..

i really liked these lines. The part where you say they are "whack" made me laugh. Maybe coz i wasnt expecting that. Your rhyming is really good and well placed.

Wow! What a very clever poem you have written here Randy! Took my breath away, the complexity of this piece. (and it rhymes!!!!)
Very cleverly put together Randy, you are a true Poet of the first order!! Well done!
(did they find the Higgins bosun?!)

Very good, and very long!!
I have read stephen Hawkings a brief history of time, he suggests that the universe is expanding and is also spherical, (if I remember rightly) But even so it's not infinite, as to expand it would need to grow from one size to another!! He didn't explain what it was expanding into though!!
This poem is a classic science vs the bible in my view. Science can disprove the theories of the bible but science cannot disprove faith. God is omnipresent therefore would not be detected by science. However remember this, our universe could be existing right now under somebodies fingernail. Maybe that's where the universe is expanding into?

Great poem by the way, the length may put a few people off. But you put forward a great argument.

regards

Darren

Darren

Thank you.. I'm really glad you enjoyed it and especially glad you share a like interest in the topic. I to have read Stephen hawkings who is indeed a bright fellow, I think he is bitter about existence tho, and wrong on a few topics. None the less he has taught me and helped me to ponder quite a bit on different things.

You made a interesting comment in saying my poem is a classic science vs the bible. I do want to point out that I believe science and religion go hand in hand, meaning they both "in Truth" support each other perfectly, After all God created everything and if science is his medium then so be it, Whether man can comprehend it is another story. I feel in my ramblings that I shed light, a bit more light even on the understandings of it, at least that is my goal. It it my hobby to comprehend how GOD created it all. There is a point where even science becomes transcendent though, and that is at the moment it reaches GOD himself.

You also make another interesting comment about existence potentially being underneath someones finger nail, I don't necessarily think that...lol, but I do have a poem called
"existence is a bead of light" you might enjoy it! that is if you like my long winded poems on the topic.

Its so far been a pleasure reading your reviews on my writes. I will definitely being taking a gander at your poems here soon.