As usuall good vision, very pro sounding. =)

A friend of yours told me to check out this poem when it was posted. I almost forgot but I'm glad I ran across it. It's wicked dark and sucks the reader into the evil side of the dark world. Excellent wording, a chilling brilliant write

I bow to the King of dark poems, the almighty ruler of the realm, sending chills over the body. Brilliant wording, excellent flow and chillingly dark
Loved it
Connie

Cute it really is babe!

I agree with Connie ^
You really do dark poems justice, they just ooze imagery and the wording is exquisite, absolutely amazing once again.
I am loving reading your poems, and will definately definately keep reading more as you submit,

Love
Tara
xxx

Every death is a new beginning. you vocabulary is exquisite. Armageddon is only the beginning. i can sense your dark and sinister tone. seems appropriate to read for Halloween. nice job

~kuro

I do like this piece. I found it to build vived pictures in my mind. My only critique is that I feel you went over the top using big words.

still a very good write

5/5

This was awesome. i think you did a better job than i did. i was highly impressed by this. truly remarkable. great piece

I love your comparison: ) great write: )