Such a vivid image you penned, very nice Raj

Raj, this has to be about a butterfly. That is the image that immediately came to mind but if the reader really looks more closely it could also be about a young. If that is the case, good use of metaphors. In any event, well done.

What beauty this poem showed me, it had such a calm gentle feeling about it. Amazing on all points

Connie

Such a sad write and very vivid. I could picture an angel with broken wings and a broken life..touching.

Your poems are always beautiful written and touching Raj.... and I just loved this one by you. You have a way with words, and a real talent that shines in this piece. You have brought nature, sadness, and love all together and produced an exquisite write :))

Excellent Raj! ... :D

Lots of Love :) ... Olwin

Eerie..it gave me chills.
I love the s l o w l y part, and the choice of wording.
Well done.