Comments : My Everything

  • 12 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    Aww, so cute(:

    This poem shows how much you love them & how much they mean to you<3.
    Flowed perfectly(
    amazingg hun(:
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by average thoughts

    Beautiful, i am going to send this to my brother and one more thing..its nominated..5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by A lonely soul

    To hold so much love for someone is almost insane. Lucky be the guy/friend for whom it was writtten. Exquisite!

  • 12 years ago

    by kiara

    This was sooo cute!!!!!!!!!
    i totally felt the love you poured into this!!!
    awesome. 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by lOsT sOuL

    Thanks a lot for the sweet poem.. i don't have any words to explain about how much i love this poem..:):) it really means a lot to me thanks ..:):) 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    This poem shows a gentle heart that is ready to share a bonded friendship. Flowed nicely, and touched many

  • 12 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Wow, this poem is great. It has a ton of emotion and meaning. The word choice is wonderful, the flow stands out. The imagery is beautiful, and it is so creative. You penned something that truly is amazing.

    I am a rose
    a ray of sunshine
    but you are my world
    and I have considered things
    that of which I would do
    if you were to perish before me
    though I have never thought
    of how that feeling might be

    By the way ^^ is my favorite section of the poem. Nice job.

  • 12 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    This poem is amazing:) wish ur friendship last forever:)5/5 from me too:)

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    It flows, somehow, good, and the images, are great.
    well done!

  • 12 years ago

    by Bobby

    I like when I read something so great that it puts me right inside it thinking about someone. This is beautiful and very well felt within 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Donnie Schrieber

    Sweet Poem.I Know How You Feel Here.