A good write...!!

This is awesome. Excellent piece. All of the techniques you have shown really shine and the word choice is so fantastic. 5/5 from me, because I was stunned by this piece.

Well, if you realllly care about my opinion, then I advise you to start a novel, that is if you didn't yet. ;) I enjoyed this, more than any poetry on this site, not that I love to compliment, I don't have any reason to. But seriously, can't YOU agree with me? Lol

I mean, I felt every and each word, I was interested till the very very end, though the way you wrote it eyes a little bit eye-tiring, if you get what I mean. :)

Good for you, nominated the next week.

Noura is right, you could really write a novel, I am trying but I suck at it lol, you should give it a try 5/5

Great, fantastic, how much more should I describe it? :)