Comments : Autumn (Haiku)

  • 12 years ago

    by nouriguess

    You always take me to another planet while reading your pieces, Zahra, I can never guess I'm still on Earth! you take me to a colorful world of contemplation, love and emotions. You rock at everything, at nature poems, at sensual love ones, at life experiences, at everything, everything! I like your personality that I have known through your poetry, you are not only an amazing writer but a very good person too. And that's what I could get by our short conversations and your poetry.

    You always make me long for the next number of poems, I wowed when I saw your poems are now 38! hahaha :P Please keep submitting this beautiful amazing work, you are an inspiration to me, good job. :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    Mmm, intersting. Haikus can be so cozy and enchanting. I liked this one. Imaginative and carries lots of meaning.

    Go Zahra :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Lostlove1

    Either i am sleeping or the syllable count is not right.. 5-7-5. An easy fix :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    I used a syllable counter... I guess maybe not that accurate :S << awkward. I'll edit

  • 12 years ago

    by Lostlove1

    Much better :) Write on!

  • 12 years ago

    by Yakori bint Muhammed

    Nature is one of my favourite theme in poetry. Autumn has lovely set of words that creates colorful imagery. Short as usual of haiku form but yours is awe-inspiring and lingers in the mind for awhile. I love your style, full of sound images and classy words. I appreciate your magnificent talent. Jazakallah, cheers! :)