Nice poem. Flowing attractive and emotional.

"Like a drop of water into the ocean,
You were swallowed by uncertainty,
Lost among the grains of sand,
That make up what we call eternity.
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My favorite stanza. It brought depth and meaning to the whole poem, the center or hub of what you were saying.
Excellent structure, flow and theme.

I don't know if you remember me, I am Nano. :) Well, I guess you didn't, Lol.
Ok, just wanted to tell you that your poems especially the sad ones are touching, they touch me in so many ways. :)

The flow and rhymes were really good, glad you submitted something new. ;D

I love this poem! The flow was wonderful and it "brought" me into the poem with every line! Good work my friend!

This was such a touching piece. It really spoke to me. I espically loved the first two stanza's

Excellent

5/5

Awesom flow with too much missed missing feelings , fear of becoming just because again , on the edge of lossing faith , a pretty job has stood against the emotional storm (X

Woow the power and emotion of this piece is mind blowin i loved the ways you used the earth with the sand and ocean. .. Then the stars. .. The rhym n wording was perfect 5/5

tony x

Woow the power and emotion of this piece is mind blowin i loved the ways you used the earth with the sand and ocean. .. Then the stars. .. The rhym n wording was perfect 5/5

tony x

The first thing that struck me was the flow, it was flawless and the wording too really fit into the deep and sadness of the poem,
You really made me feel what I was reading, and that was because the emotion was very strong and the imagery worked really well.

Love
Tara
xx