Comments : Second chance

  • 12 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    I love thiss(:

    I now know how life would be without you
    Like a black and white photograph
    Dull and lifeless
    A deceased life with no drive
    A frozen connection
    Someplace no one would want to be
    -My favorite stanza.

    This flowed beautifully :), The love you feel & hurt u feel by the loss is amazing :).It draws you in making you want to read more.

    Awesome job girl<3
    5/5 :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Kelwin lost in thought

    Awww very good. I know that feeling darling 10/5 good job