Comments : The Poetess and the lover

  • 12 years ago

    by A lonely soul

    This is a indeed a very nice love poem. It flows smoothly, enraptures emotions of the reader and the best part:
    She lost the keys to her tomorrow

    I also wonder if "many", instead of "every" would be a better read for the 3rd line, and "many a" instead of "every" in the 3rd to the last line.

  • 12 years ago

    by Dr sarat sonowal

    Thank u my friend

  • 12 years ago

    by Dr sarat sonowal

    Thank u my friend