I thought this was a great poem, the flow was good, although maybe adding some fillers at beginning of lines and removing the capital letters is easier on the eyes.
The wording was simple and spoke to the reader, the image was clear as was the message.

A lovely piece in all
well done

love Tara
x

This poem is really good. I can relate to it. I really like it but it could be a lil better

This poem is really good. I can relate to it. I really like it but it could be a lil better

This piece is great. Quite simple but appealing. The heart wants what the heart wants :P

This is brilliant..i was actually feelin ur pain in this poem..i could see a girl crying..i loved it from the begining up to the end.this is exactly what am going through....5/5

I really related to this, between the lines of how sad the risk can be when I chance my heart on someone. thank you for sharing 5/5

Good poem, i like it x

Still have no idea bout love,, and broken relationship... yet,, I find this poem quite good.. well done :)

I liked it although you could use some fillers to make it more appealing, still, i liked it.