Comments : Words upon Words

  • 12 years ago

    by Lostlove1

    Beautiful write! I like how you start of telling us what (she) is Not, and finish with images that show us what she is. Worth the read, for sure. :)

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Nothing cliche about this poem, awesome bro. It feels more down to earth than most love poems. Cool write

  • 12 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    Great choice of words..flawless

  • 12 years ago

    by Pamela

    :') so amazingly wonderous and full of beauty. Real love, you just loved her, not her features but her.

  • 12 years ago

    by aminath

    I liked the descriptions that you have used here. Beautiful!